Women are advised in the article 23 ways to trick people into thinking they are thin and the stereotypical female... Perfect. They are told how to distract people away from their "faults" and focus on their "best" features. Women are taught how to style their hair and what to wear in this article in the attempt to be the stereotypical "perfect" female... Thin, pretty, tall and well dressed. Women are taught how to appear taller and slimer with many techniques. This is very disrespectful towards women. They are saying that women are not perfect and need to change to look what society thinks is perfect and how society thinks everyone should look.
It is unfair towards women because not everyone can look like the models on magazines... Most of the time models don't even look like themselves on the front of the magazines. Society has crazy expectations of women in todays time and some of these expectations are unattainable and society has to except that.
Well done Shelby :)
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Just be aware of your spelling: "then", "slimer", "except", sometimes you are spelling words that are technically correct but aren't actually the words you are wanting. You should also be vigilant about the use of apostrophes (e.g. "todays" should be today's) and watch your sentence structure. There are a couple of places where careful proof-reading is needed to ensure that the sentences flow logically.
Keep up the good work!
Well done, Shelby. This is a thoughtful response.
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